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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，我们来解读2021年12月18日的大陆雅思大作文真题。老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
题目改写报告类大作文高分句型展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题：
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for them. Why? What are effective ways to improve people's eating habits?
审题：
Type: Report 报告类 (Reason and solution 理由&解决方案)Body 1: Reasons: laziness and convenienceBody 2: Solution: Education and regulationKey words: why/effective ways to improve
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
12.18大陆雅思大作文真题| 怎么改善饮食习惯 (母语教师范文+朗读+词汇中英对照)
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A great swathe of the population enjoys eating food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their health, despite knowing this is the case. This essay shall explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, along with suggesting methods that could help people to eat more healthily.
One of the major causes behind this habit of eating unhealthy food is that many of these foods are convenient to either purchase or prepare. This is especially true when it comes to the fast-food industry, whereby instead of finding healthy alternatives, many people will simply opt for the easy and time-saving method of ordering from McDonald's or KFC, or other such junk food outlets. Likewise, in today’s world of disposable goods and ready-to-use products, many have become lazy and would rather elect for opening a package of processed food than to spend the time buying healthy ingredients to cook by themselves.
To counteract this trend of unhealthy eating, probably the most effective method that can be brought to bear on this trend is that of education. Just as Mcdonald's understands that marketing to children can help secure future consumers, so society should understand that by educating the young about the benefits of eating healthy food, they are more likely to avoid unhealthy foods in their later life. Government regulations can also help to squelch peoples’ desire for foods that in the long-term can have a devasting effect on health, with such policies as an anti-fat tax or an extra tax on foods that contain additives proven to be toxic, helping to guide citizens’ dietary habits.
In conclusion, the main impetuses for people to acquire an unhealthy dietary tendency are those of convenience and laziness, and that both education, especially of the young, and governmental regulatory policies, can help to overcome this negative trend within society.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction -
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：
Many people = A great swathe of the populationlike to eat = enjoys eatingunhealthy food = food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their healtheven though = despite knowingStandard Phrase for the “Report” type essay 报告类大作文通用句型：
This essay shall explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, along with suggesting methods thatWords showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
thatand that, despitethis is the caseThis, along withVocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
a great swathe of 一大批；一大片；很多non-nutritious 没有营养的deleterious effect on 对……产生有负面影响；对……有有害的影响healthily 健康地- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提的点: Why?
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
One of the major causesVocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
behind this habit of 在这个习惯背后the fast-food industry 快餐产业alternatives 备选opt for 选择time-saving method 省时的方法outlets 专营店disposable goods 一次性商品ready-to-use products 即用产品；现成产品elect for 选择processed food 加工食品Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
is thatto eitherThis is especially true when it comes to, whereby instead of, many people will simplyor other suchLikewise,, manyrather ____ than- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提的点：Effective ways to improve people's eating habits
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
To counteract this trend of 为了抵制/缓和这种趋势Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
be brought to bear on 应用；调动help secure future 保障未来to avoid 避免later life 以后的生活government regulations 政府规章to squelch 制止in the long-term 从长远来看have a devastating effect on 对……有破坏性的影响anti-fat taxadditives proven to be toxic 有害的添加剂to guide 引导dietary habit 饮食习惯Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
this trend, probably the mostthatis that ofJust as….., sothat by, theymore likely totheir, with suchas, helping to- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
In conclusion,Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
impetus(es) 推动；动力to acquire 采取tendency 趋势laziness 懒惰governmental regulatory policies 监管政策to overcome 克服negative trend 消极趋势Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
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